Harem After Regression

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Bad "novel," poorly translated

Reviewed it on October 23, 2025

This appears to have been written in some other language, then translated to English. (It could be AI generated "in the style" of some poorly-translated story, so I am unwilling to commit.) The translation suffers from poor spelling and poor grammar, including pronoun/antecedent disagreement (I/he and he/she), and homonym errors. I have seen something like that before, so the bad use of "he" might be an artifact of some translation process. The story itself is simplistic and incomplete. The MC is a Marty-Stu "regressor" -- a do-over time traveller -- who is continually surprised to find various women falling at his feet and lusting after him, and who ranks up behind the scenes. Every time we see their stats, the numbers are up but there is no mention of making the numbers go up. Apparently, we are to focus only on the sex. Worse, this is apparently "book #1 of however-many you'll buy" so what plot arcs exist are truncated by the end of the book. (Presumably that problem would be fixed by purchasing more installments.) There do appear to be several story arcs involving the MC and various females. But the writing is so staccato that there isn't much to hang the story arcs on. Imagine if David Drake had started out writing erotica before really getting into the swing of writing. There are some "conventions" that are in place, for reasons I'm unsure about. I have to suspect that this work was published on some other website with rules about four-letter words and sex scenes. The MC has a c**k or a d**k, never spelled out. There is an attempt to warn about "sex seens" in the middle chapters, after having some without warning in early chapters. The entire last few chapters is sex, unmarked by warnings. In summary, I cannot recommend this to anyone. There are too many problems, of too many kinds, to be ignored. This isn't "a good story if you read past the ." It's just bad on a bunch of levels. Stay away.