(5 reviews)
$3.99
Tag
by A Well-Traveled Man
Language: English
Categories: Fiction » Coming of Age
Content Rating: All Ages
His first memories of our family are of his mother and father going to work or some social gathering and leaving him with the hired help. We had a maid, cook, and nanny. Tag saw his parents once or twice a week for dinner. Otherwise, the help took care of raising him. He was enrolled in a private school because you couldn’t have a Gallo going to public school.
Tag’s parents and Grandfather never got along. Grandfather never agreed with the way his parents were raising him. Somehow, he got them to agree to let him spend the summers at his ranch. Let me tell you, he loved getting away from his parents and spending time with Gramps. Now, for the rest of the story
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Greg
Decent story, needs editing.
Reviewed it on July 2, 2025
Spelling errors abound. Jumping between 1st and 3rd person within the same sentence detracts from the story. Desperate need of editing.cgr71067
Get a damn editor!
Reviewed it on July 2, 2025
Why on earth would the author keep switching between first and third person in the same sentence? Even an AI wouldn't write this bad! That's a shame because the story has potential, but the grammar sours any good impression really quickly!