Tag

by A Well-Traveled Man

Language: English

Published: 2025-06-30. 120,418 Words.

Categories: Fiction » Coming of Age

Content Rating: All Ages

His first memories of our family are of his mother and father going to work or some social gathering and leaving him with the hired help. We had a maid, cook, and nanny. Tag saw his parents once or twice a week for dinner. Otherwise, the help took care of raising him. He was enrolled in a private school because you couldn’t have a Gallo going to public school.
Tag’s parents and Grandfather never got along. Grandfather never agreed with the way his parents were raising him. Somehow, he got them to agree to let him spend the summers at his ranch. Let me tell you, he loved getting away from his parents and spending time with Gramps. Now, for the rest of the story

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dydrmr1

This Book has the best editing effort

Reviewed it on July 7, 2025

I just finished reading this book. It has the best editing effort of all the books I have read by this Author. I very good Read.

Greg

Decent story, needs editing.

Reviewed it on July 2, 2025

Spelling errors abound. Jumping between 1st and 3rd person within the same sentence detracts from the story. Desperate need of editing.

cgr71067

Get a damn editor!

Reviewed it on July 2, 2025

Why on earth would the author keep switching between first and third person in the same sentence? Even an AI wouldn't write this bad! That's a shame because the story has potential, but the grammar sours any good impression really quickly!

peterbakerthebaker

no substance

Reviewed it on July 8, 2025

if you took out all the getting up at 2am centering and eating breakfast then you might fill 2 paragraphs with story